1.图画型
第一段:套话+图片描述+套话
What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! (并列押韵,可以说是有用的废话)Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. (妙在featured和who,插入的独立主格结构。这句话是得分重点,需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。)However ridiculous and humorous(押韵) it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather significant implications . (可以认为是有用的废话.)
第二段:主题句+深入阐述+分条阐述+分条阐述
1、Evidently , the purpose of the illustration is to mirror the fact that teamwork (中心词)is essen
tial to achieving success .(第一句,这是揭示主题的句子,大家的句型百变不离其宗。也是得分重点.)2、Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to (这个句型是某年阅读理解的第一句)cooperation , which has profound implications for both individual and whole society .(第二句,这是一个长句子,同时也是一个概括句,改卷老师看到你思路清晰。)
3、First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for teamwork is of the greatest importance , if one want to realize dreams . (第三句,分述)4、In addition , our country as a whole also could not afford to part with(这个句型是我从某年阅读理解里借用过来的) teamwork spirit,(这个单词可以不要,不过我看到真题里有这个用法,单词简单,但是用法深奥,应该是比较地道的英语。我想改卷老师一定很喜欢。)going to move forward in terms of politics , economy , culture and society .(第四句,分述)
第三段:评论
Teamwork spirit ,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society .(此句是插入+并列) Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of teamwork spirit .(转折句,是我从徐绽的作文书里总结归纳的。)only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run ! (强调句,高联的辅导班讲过这个句型,强调+并列+插入)
篇三:高中英语作文:就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
高中英语作文:就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
In the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle but her father is on her left showing the direction, her mother on her right with a first-aid box and behind her is her granny, who is already out of breath. They are all running as they are holding the bicycle. Sweat is falling down their foreheads. The girl is shouting, "Leave me alone. I can manage."
Today parents and grandparents tend to worry too much about their children. As an only child in the family, I am too much looked after by my parents. But is it necessary for them to do soNo. Indeed, they love me, but I don't want this kind of love. I need independence more, because independence is important in modern society. Without is, we'll not be able to meet challenges in the future. Certainly, I don't mean that I don't need my parents' help, but I want them to help me gain my independence
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